Maple Story Story (o_o.. Lets put it this way, its a story about maple story)

Ok, im starting a new story, which, hopefully, will keep going. If i dont update it in a week, PM me and tell me to. Ok, lets get started with the prolouge:

"I cant move" said Dark Lord "Me niether" said Athena Pierce. Grendel the really old has really done it this time, they both thought... "Are you two worthy to take on a journey?" Boomed Grendels voice. "Yyy...es...Grendel..." Athena said. Grendel has been Dark Lord and Athenas master, Aka theyre teacher. "You must go to Orbis. You stroll along the park, and find a boy." Grendel held up a wanted poster. "A jiiniba member? Hes the last one, isnt he? I thought they got kicked out of orbis AND victoria, because the clan had caused trouble..." Dark lord said. "Plus they are my students... Except for the one thats left" he said again. "You will be sent with my best student." He said. A magician came out of the other room. "Jihn, introduce yourself to Dark Lord and Athena." Grendel said to the magician. "My name is Jihn," Jihn said, "And i have mastered Holy. I have mastered ice. I have mastered fire. I have mastered wind, air, water, and earth. I can do any spell, because i am a mixed mage. I was created to avenge my clan, the Jiinila clan. I am the last female in the clan..."

Now the REAL story starts.
Chapter one:
Athena was just doing her buisiness in her office. A young bowman came with a scroll. "Im ready for my job advancement, Id like to become a crossbowman!" he said. "Go to the first map twords sleepywood with this letter." Athena said, handing him the letter. 5 minutes later, another one came. "I want to be a hunter" He said. Athena picked up a hunter letter, and gave it to him. "Go to the first map twords sleepywood with it, and find the NPC." she said. She got out her crystal ball to see what Dark Lord was doing.
"Bandit please" a young theif said. "Take it to the second map to the east of Kerning" he said. "Hes doing what im doing.." Athena thought. Then all of a sudden, Athena and Dark Lord got a letter from Grendel. When they reached his place, they went in. All of a sudden, they couldnt move. "I cant move" said Dark Lord "Me niether" said Athena Pierce. Grendel the really old has really done it this time, they both thought... "Are you two worthy to take on a journey?" Boomed Grendels voice. "Yyy...es...Grendel..." Athena said. Grendel has been Dark Lord and Athenas master, Aka theyre teacher. "You must go to Orbis. You stroll along the park, and find a boy." Grendel held up a wanted poster. "A jiiniba member? Hes the last one, isnt he? I thought they got kicked out of orbis AND victoria, because the clan had caused trouble..." Dark lord said. "Plus they are my students... Except for the one thats left" he said again. "You will be sent with my best student." He said. A magician came out of the other room. "Jihn, introduce yourself to Dark Lord and Athena." Grendel said to the magician. "My name is Jihn," Jihn said, "And i have mastered Holy. I have mastered ice. I have mastered fire. I have mastered wind, air, water, and earth. I can do any spell, because i am a mixed mage. I was created to avenge my clan, the Jiinila clan. I am the last female in the clan. I cannot lose my purpose of living. I cannot lose confidence. I must live." She said. Jihn, the master of flying, used a flying spell on Dark Lord and Athena. Then they set out for Orbis.
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