Another first team build

Was thinking of an idea for a first team build and i would like a little feedback if possible

ok here goes:

War/Nec
(Sword but can be adapted for axe if preferred )
choice of shield or +30 health focus
12 in death attribs -rest as preffered for max effect

|sever |gash|Final Thrust|Vile Touch|Virulence|Necrotic Trans(poss consume corpse)|Frenzy| Res

idea of this war is to cause a lot of conditions that can be re-applied while still being low on the target list and causing attack damage alongside the other warrior
the corspe denial is to be cast as a target drops to gain energy or to cause widespread poison to close foes.

War/players choice

Basically your everyday attacking war.left open for players preference and there to keep the damage coming with his/her partner, suggested ideas include a fast attacker maybe or a high damage hammer war


Necromancer
16 Blood
rest into curses and soulreaping

Soul Leach |Shadow Strike| Life Syphon|Strip enchantment|Mark of Subversion|Rigor Mortis| faintheartedness|Res

the idea of this necromancer is to shutdown the target from self healing(Soul Leach) remove any enchants cast to help the target (strip)soften the target and cause damage +a little degen as well.

Mesmer
attribs into illusion and domination

Not too experienced with mesmers but what i would initially suggest would go like this:

Fragility|Phantom pain|Backfire|Fevered Dreams|Soothing Images|Shatter Enchantment|Illusion Of weakness|res

basically a bit of a toolkit mes, there to throw about as much trouble as possible


Spare slot here:
A high and fast output damage dealer to take down the weakend target (poss Air ele? )

The three monk team
These guys keep you alive please - nuff said!
(dont ask me about monks i dont know what goes on at their tea parties!! )


feel free to take what you want frm this and create a working build !the only thing i ask is that it remains a fun build that anyone can pick up and play !
Im open for ideas because i would find it nice to work with a team of friends and see this build win at least 1 tombs match! CHEERS! http://www.theamazonbasin.com/gw/forums/index.php?showtopic=3800